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Evening Leftover by ageha1sBf Evening Leftover by ageha1sBf
giftart for :iconippotsk:, hbd dude!
I'm sorry that your oc looks so different here

btw, I know that the pile of trash behind Milan doesn't look 3d at all orz


 

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ippotsk Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
UWAAAAAH YOU DREW THEM
I CAN'T THANK YOU ENOUGH FOR THIS, SENPAI, AHAHAHAHA....

*ahem*

Aah, your style is as refreshing as ever. It always has this recognizable element to it; from the adjusted view/perspective, the spread-out sky, the scenery in the background, and the characters looking really sharp. |"D

And for that pile of trash BG element, it'd look better if you used sharper/more solid brush strokes. Try using a wide range of SAI brush shapes, it helps give a natural, mixed look to your trash mountain. And the shading could be more soft-spreading, rather than a single line of light (as it looks a bit like paper, eheh gomen)
All this could also apply to other BG elements, such as dirt grounds, rocks, and maybe even walls. 8)
Maybe even add a photo of trash as an overlay, to make it look more legit? :iconheplz: /killed

But anyways, other than that, I think everything is still as sweet as always! Just try spending more time on the basic shading and BG elements, and you'll be great. 8)

Again, thank you so much for the present, Fuchsia-senpai! I'm really glad to get something like this from you, haha... :icongtthplz:
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Shirei-Shou Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
mentionnya salah code tuh. ^^

langitnya kereeeen
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ageha1sBf Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sebenarnya gak yakin sama warna langitnya
antara awan dan langit warnanya gak masuk 
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